You can be more specific with the time period.
Rather than just talking about their influence on each other, maybe you could connect it to specifically china a little more by expanding the question and also asking how Taoism and Buddhism effect China.
Narrow the time period down and also specify what kind of buddhism you're referring to.
this is the final draft.
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You can be more specific with the time period.
ReplyDeleteRather than just talking about their influence on each other, maybe you could connect it to specifically china a little more by expanding the question and also asking how Taoism and Buddhism effect China.
ReplyDeleteNarrow the time period down and also specify what kind of buddhism you're referring to.
ReplyDeletethis is the final draft.
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